DJBunny

Your (and sephfire's) point about the synths is definitely right on the mark; I agree I need to work on it. I swear I meant to put reverb in! Honestly, I was planning on it, then forgot to do that before I rendered the song. http://bluelaguna.net/downloads/mp3s/ff9music/76+-+Protecting+My+Devotion.mp3 http://bluelaguna.net/downloads/mp3s/ff9music/60+-+Loss+of+Me.mp3 Two different styles, but same melody. As you might notice...I didn't really do too much with it yet. Thanks!

Oh, I realize I have a lot of work to do before it's submittable. I'm just looking for feedback on what works and what doesn't at this point

http://rapidshare.com/files/66716066/inprogress10707_12__Protecting_My_Devotion_Final_.mp3.html Any suggestions,comments, criticism? I put this together a while ago, but just recently decided to put it up here for comments. I appreciate any feedback! Thanks!