I like this. Its something that iwould listen to /let play ///
Although i think you might need to fiddle around with some volumes- get it a bit more balanced eg lower the bass buzz a bit or something.
I like it, its really good. I also agree with Rozovian.
Perhaps you could shorten the part where the drums stop at 2:08, and bring in the bass sooner.
You could also try a different snare.