SolusLunes

Though I have nearly no presence at all on this site, I'd still like to send you guys ten bucks because you're awesome. That and the fact that I intend to put some of my musical effort towards something that I can call an OCRemix. Soon. +$10.

Do you have a .mid or something for this song to help base off of? I might give it a shot.

Wow. This is heroically awesome. Very nice work with the voices.

First problem. The bass synth, the very initial bass synth, is causing unpleasant fuzzing and cracking throughout the whole track... if it's supposed to be 80s, make it 80s without the bad parts, like fuzzing and cracking. You know what I'm saying. The melody, true enough, you didn't have enough to work with for it to be ideal. Your melody isn't bad, per se. The excellent percussion and breaks definitely uplift the track. One thing this track could use is a little structure. This would be helped, with the removal of the ever-present bass synth, as that tends to blend it all together. The song, at current, however, sounds like a bunch o' sounds without any kind of division. A breakdown would help this track out massively, mix everything down and introduce some nice, long, morphing pads. Overlay those with a 50% speed version of the main melody, and that's golden. And hell, hook the song up with a crazy speed arp with the main synth- have some fun with it, this song sounds like it's got the potential for it. Anything I might be missing? I don't think so. And it's nice to see you here Navij. Didn't think I'd see anyone I know here