As a lurker for a long time I saw the invite to comment on the WIPs. I've found a great deal of good stuff here and signed up finally to comment on this.
I really like the Overworld stuff in the middle. It seems to me to be somewhat Pumpkinesque. Similar to the things off of pisces iscariot. Seems there's a bit more of some flamenco-ish influence. I like it. The only thing that doesnt change is the beat. I think once you get the tweaks down, you should mute some of the snare or kick and dimute the percussion during the quiet time. The time signature seems well placed but it is very repetitive. The beat and time can be the same but substitute some quieter percussion. Softer high hat and brushed snares rather than hard ones, almost remove the kick and either leave that open with the beat or replace it with with something more mellow. Then work it back into the dungeon phase and rock it out. This is a really good mix.
I am by no means a composer, gave it up years ago but i am always inspired by the work done here. Please continue to inspire and maybe I'll do one of these some day.
