Zerossoul

Okay, I've taken a few suggestions, And I've made this allot better. I'm still having a hard time finding a good organ VST, and as soon as I find one, I'll add it in. I've also made It a few BPM faster, I'm not sure I needed to though. [link] I Haven't been able to do much with the drums yet, it's my least favorite thing to mess around with. But I'll make it a bit more snappy next time I post. Thanks for all the wonderful feedback, It's really getting this song going!

This is my first time on OCR, so if I do something a little out of the ordinary, that's why. Okay, the main reason this is here is because I got half way through the song and didn't know what to do. So it cuts off half way through it. I need as much feedback as I can get on this one! I wanted to do an evil version of this song, And I think I have a good thing going, but it sounds a bit repetitive. so I'm looking for ways to spice it up. Here is the link [link] and here's the source [link]

Hey, I'm zerossoul. I've been listening to songs on OCR for at least 5 years. About two years ago, I was inspired to join the fray. so I started gathering VST's and such, and learning different programs. And now, I finally got to the point where I feel confident that I can do some arrangements. I've been playing the paino for 10 years, and the cello for 7. I can play the guitar, but I'm not that great. I grew up in a very musically inclined familly. Both my parrents are in a bluegrass band, and my mom teaches orchestra. I have one arrangement that I'm currently working on and would like to get some feedback, does anyone know the best way to do that?