ZeroXtreem

the title was merely a place holder i had to put something in the beginning honestly i dont even know where to begin in terms of what to call it. Figured first off that ide get the song done then move on to naming the creation.

So i put out a new version let me know what you think of the new parts

I kinda figured out what i want to do for the lead with the guitar but the only problem is trying to find out where to put it in. I'm thinking about a like 1:47 ish when the trills stop and jump into the lead guitar and eventually have it incorporate that 2nd beat into it like you were talking about. Ill try working on it tonight and have somethin posted tonight. Any more suggestions will be great. Also 2 more things i wana work. 1st im thinking the re-entry at the end of the song is kinda sudden i think its like at 2:46 ish where all the beats come back in at once, and the snare roll doesnt seem out of place but missing something when the first section cuts out. Anyone wana Confirm/Deny that remember i love the suggestions thanks guys so far giving me great ideas.

Hmm i seem to be stuck with what to do with it. I like how it turned out but u said theres no lead. Any one else have any suggestions on what to do.

http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-m...ith-swords-3-0 VERSION 3.0 Dropped an octave on the riff and made a cut out part when it comes in for the first time http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-m...ith-swords-v-2 VERSION 2.0 This is my finished track waiting to see what you guys think of it. It is my first actual finished track i wana know what u people think. Lend me a hand! http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-m...le-with-swords OK i didn't do much yet and some sections need to be expanded on but i would like to get some constructive criticism for what ive got as of now. This is my first ever Remix and im new to using FruityLoops 8 so anything you possibly have to say could most likely benefit me. Thanks in advance -Zero

http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-motorcycle-with-swords-4-0 VERSION 4.0 Decided to try and add the remaining parts to the song, i was already told i need to extend them that they're too short but i just want to get a feel for what people think about them and if they work as per the song itself. http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-motorcycle-with-swords-3-0 VERSION 3.0 Dropped an octave on the riff and made a cut out part when it comes in for the first time http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-motorcycle-with-swords-v-2 Version 2 This is my finished track waiting to see what you guys think of it. It is my first actual finished track i wana know what u people think. Lend me a hand! http://soundcloud.com/zeroxtreem/a-motorcycle-with-swords OK i didn't do much yet and some sections need to be expanded on but i would like to get some constructive criticism for what ive got as of now. This is my first ever Remix and im new to using FruityLoops 8 so anything you possibly have to say could most likely benefit me. Thanks in advance -Zero