New version:
Alright, so I've reworked the mix, and it now has more on the production side of things. I think the drums sound kind of flat still, though I'm not sure how to fix that, and the song seems like it should be longer, but I don't know what else I should add. Anyway, I tried to add a bit more variation in the volume of the mix and the beat of the drums, and I removed the source sample at the end. So, questions, comments, critique? It still seems like it's missing something, but until I can figure out what it is, I'm open to suggestions.
And here's the source:
Megaman X - Zero's Theme 1
Also, still open for guitar samples! I'm a decent guitar player myself, and I think I could play the parts. Unfortunately, I have none of the prerequisite hardware to record live instruments. So, yeah...
(And Editing a post doesn't bump the thread, apparently... So disregard the first post now...)