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  1. Well I, for one, think this track is pretty kick-ass, though I have to ask, are you using the original audio track for the vocals or is that new stuff? if it's the original track, then if you're looking to submit it here, i'm fairly certain that's against the rules, though I could be wrong.

    It is the original vocal track. I'm not sure whether I'm going to submit it here, but obviously not now since that's against the rules and all lol.

  2. What the crap did you do to your drums, man? Half the time they simply aren't there, and when I can hear the bass drum at all it's cut off and annoyingly short. Fix that first and foremost. THis sounds like basically a trance remix of sorts, and you cannot have that without some big thumping bass drums.

    THere are some good ideas here but you need to give them more impact. Honestly, I'm just going to focus on the drums for now because I think that would fix alot of it. Get a nice thick bass drum for the downbeats, and try sidechain compressing your other synth elements to it. You also need some cymbals to add more treble energy.

  3. It's a very interesting remix, and I love me some dubstep.

    It's always good to hear the wobble bass, but yours is missing a little something. It would do with some higher end, like maybe doubling it with a sawtooth to give it more impact. Also something bothers me about the main snare drum, I think it's that it lasts a smidge too long and it also feels a bit thin. Maybe take off reverb and see how that affects it.

    I also think you could stand to use more stereo separation; everything just kind of sits in the middle for the most part.

    Other than that, it's quite good. Work on those things and repost it, I would love to see where this goes!

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