Friend of Misfortune

Hey again, thank you guys so much for listening and sending your feedback! I will change the track and keep your tips in mind. As for the chopped guitars, I recorded them in one piece and manually silenced the later half of the chord. It sounds really nasty in the beginning until 0:07, but as soon as the bass and kick drum and cymbals kick in, I felt some kind of relief while listening to it. Kind of liked the effect, so I kept it.

Hi everyone, I'm doing a cover of Viridian Forest of the Pokemon Red and Blue games. I'm still a newbie and this is my first post, so I hope I can get some feedback from you. The original song for comparison: