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Mordi
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Not bad, actually. Though, I was kinda disappointed by the lack of variety and the fact that most of it is the same with a key change thrown in and back. Work on your progression and add more sections, with those two...I'm sure you'll have something very awesome.

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It just worked when I got back to it. Weird. :)

I think I like it, but I also think the vibrato/chorus effect you've put on the synth/bass (or whatever it's supposed to be...the main melody) is a little over the top. Though that may just be me. I don't really get the key shift after the first pattern though, the song has an ubpeat feel but the transposition clashes with that, makes it sound somewhat eerie or depressing even. I like how the piano kicks in, it really heightens your song and brings variety.Also the percussive diminution halfway through the end brings a nice change of pace. Overall, it's short and sweet. Good job!

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