Cree` Posted October 27, 2008 Share Posted October 27, 2008 http://www.zshare.net/audio/510363058b748d22/ Me make song. You listen, and tell wad u tink. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hemophiliac Posted November 3, 2008 Share Posted November 3, 2008 "Hello, i'd just like to say, "Christian is a badass" Odd way to start a song if you ask me. Can't complain over that though lol. The piano in the beginning could use some humanization and the bass at that point is overpowering it. Actually through the whole thing the piano is just being drowned out, bring it up more or lower everything else. I also think the piano could use with some more parts to it rather then just a solo line...this is because of not much going on (despite having the soundscape filled). The drums could go for some more variation and interest...they're rather cookie cutter and uninteresting. String break was a good change up. I don't quite understand the point of the clip still. So my biggest comment would just be, add more stuff overall to the whole piece. Cheers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cree` Posted November 10, 2008 Author Share Posted November 10, 2008 "Hello, i'd just like to say, "Christian is a badass"Odd way to start a song if you ask me. Can't complain over that though lol. The piano in the beginning could use some humanization and the bass at that point is overpowering it. Actually through the whole thing the piano is just being drowned out, bring it up more or lower everything else. I also think the piano could use with some more parts to it rather then just a solo line...this is because of not much going on (despite having the soundscape filled). The drums could go for some more variation and interest...they're rather cookie cutter and uninteresting. String break was a good change up. I don't quite understand the point of the clip still. So my biggest comment would just be, add more stuff overall to the whole piece. Cheers Thanks for the suggestions/comment; very helpful. Will be working on a reoccurring theme throughout the piece, and will be adding some variation to the drums. The song originally got started as a piano piece, but I'm still trying to figure out how I can incorporate it into the mix. As far as the whole "Christian Is a Badass" vocals goes...The song is intended to go on myspace once it is completed as my default song Thanks again, Cree Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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