Nekofrog Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 No, this is not the other Lufia 2 tune I'm working on; this is an entirely independent and new song. This actually came about due to thasauce's compo on thursday night; I wrote and recorded this in one hour as per compo rules, and liked it so much that I decided to make it a full tune. If I had to classify it, I'd call it melodic death metal. Right now it's pretty rough from a production standpoint; so as far as critiques go I know what's wrong with it. After all, this is about an hour's work total Hissing/clicking/clipping are present, and will be resolved when it comes time for the final project. All in all this is haping up to be one of my favorite tunes ever. Comments? Questions? Adoration? Anyway, on with the show http://ocrwip.fireslash.net/?fid=36 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piano Forte Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 Hmmm...can't hear the original melody. Probably forgot it XD. Anyway, cool song, love the change from soft mellow guitar playing to ass-kicking riffs. You should definitely finish this one! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyril the Wolf Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 So wait... is this remixing Battle 3? I'm so confused. I like the idea, but its so weird if it is remixing that. Oh well, I want more. Death metal FTW. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shade Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 No familiarity with the source whatsoever, but I absolutely love the style, especially the juxtaposing of the sedate delayed guitar stuff with the 7-string crunch. Makes me think of bands like Nahemah. Very cool stuff. Pretty much all of my criticisms are production-based, and you say you've got that under wraps, but I have to say it anyway - the drums definitely need a bit more depth to the sound. As it is, they're pretty clicky. (I'm sure that's something that will be receiving attention) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razorwind Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 Also not familiar with the source, I haven't played Lufia in a long time, but this is indeed quite good. Needs a little cleaning up, but it's still WIP so thats a given. This feels almost post-rock ish, the opening especially... but that might just be because Ive been listening to too much of that recently, '. Looking forward to hearing the finished version. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gario Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 Ha, this SOUNDS like it could be Iris' theme / Sinistral battle, but it's a VERY interpretive mix. It's kept my interest - I'll keep an ear on this one. BTW - I thought this was cool in the OHC, too... but didn't seem to fit the theme too well to me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hewhoisiam Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 Done in a + - an hour?! Well, like you said, you're going to work on it some more and know what's wrong with it I look forward to a longer closer to complete work. If you're basing it on something (and I don't think you are, despite all the good guesses in this thread so far) Get us a source so that we may taunt you properly, and/or work pieces to fit somefing. Good stuff! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skummel Maske Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 I don't know the source, but this really rocks. Keep working on this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigitalDevilDrums Posted February 1, 2009 Share Posted February 1, 2009 Yeah dude, the arrangment/layering is solid. Obviously it's going to need some more length, and I'm interested to see what you come up with as far as a bridge/B section, as well as how you are going to kick it up for the finish. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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