NSMB 'World 1 Overworld' WIP

[Chernabogue]

Hey, I'm starting a New Super Mario Bros. mix of the first world overworld theme ("Walking the Plains").

Please comment and give me advises to make it better and cooler ! Thanks !

http://www.mediafire.com/?hzzmzndyjty

(PS: Sorry for the Mediafire link, Tindeck has some problems with me)

[Rom Tom]

Sounds like a midi rip off the original. Of course, with added effects and default drum loops. And it starts sounding very muddy around half way through and the end. I dont even know what the ending is.

Now, dont take any of this badly... learn from it, plox xD

Remember, a Remix is your own interpretation of the song, not a 'remake.' For a remix, you take the source tune, start from scratch, and develop a remix with hints of the original song in it with your own vibrant/mello flare added to it. Your song here sounds directly like the original.

If there's absolutely anything going for this song, it is the ambient-ish feel of the rhodes.

Now, 'nuff sed.

[PROTO·DOME]

Sounds like a midi rip off the original.

...

Now, 'nuff sed.

Sweet, short and true.

It does indeed sound like a MIDI rip- it's definitely not a remix. The SFX was cool in the ending, coupled with the ending theme, that's the kind of creative flare that'll write a mix. (Although, I wouldn't mix this particular track with the ending theme at the end as it's already been done- by Jredd I believe.)

Stray from the source, add in some original chord sequences or melody and you'll have yourself an awesome remix. Good luck!