JaredCowing Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 Hi all, I recently finished a new 6 minute track which spans quite a few styles and tempi in several sections, from jazz to pop to ambient, I imagine a character exploring a city, each street bringing a new feel and color. I thought I'd share the link on this board and see if I can get anyone's feedback on exactly what genre this might fit under. Feedback always welcome! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/275032 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKrow Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 I really like the style you picked and rolled with here; as far as the arrangement goes it's very well done. As far as mastering and quality, it does sound... just a little off. A couple parts I noticed some clipping when instruments got a bit loud. Turning down a few of the high frequencies might be a good idea. During the end it felt a little crowded probably because all the instruments weren't separated well enough. Play with your EQ a little until everything sounds pretty decently balanced. Some parts with the piano made it sound pretty fake, so I recommend humanizing it a bit, and it doesn't hurt to do it for your electronic instruments as well. Note velocities can give your piece a lot of flavor. That's all I have to say for now, but keep up the good work, I like your style. If I was part of new grounds I'd give an 8 as it is now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaredCowing Posted October 16, 2009 Author Share Posted October 16, 2009 Thanks, all very good advice, especially with the EQ, that is something I need to work on. Thanks for listening! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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