Dissidia Posted November 30, 2009 Share Posted November 30, 2009 Creative title, I know I actually put down some time for this one so bring on the feedback! I Gotta hurry to school now. Enjoy. http://tindeck.com/listen/pgyj Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brandon Goins Posted November 30, 2009 Share Posted November 30, 2009 My only complaint would be the lack of dynamics throughout the entire piece. The lack of velocity control coupled with the rigid rhtyhm of the song makes it sound too mechanical for such a natural arrangement. However upon listening to the original version, I would have the same complaint about it. However I think a piano can get away with it where a flute cannot. Overall, a very fun and lively adaptation with plenty of original elements. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissidia Posted November 30, 2009 Author Share Posted November 30, 2009 Thank you Maybe I'm gonna play some with the dynamics tomorrow, it might make a really big difference. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissidia Posted December 3, 2009 Author Share Posted December 3, 2009 It didn't turn out the way I imagined it to, so I will leave it as it is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
halc Posted December 3, 2009 Share Posted December 3, 2009 not a lot of variation in the arrangement, and quite a bit of direct repetition. don't be afraid to include some more original writing in your remixes. drum patterns sound mechanical and have some odd rhythms that take the waltzy feel away from the tune. sequencing is a bit stiff and the samples could still use quite a bit of work in the realism department. not a bad effort, keep practicing and your craft will improve Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissidia Posted December 3, 2009 Author Share Posted December 3, 2009 Good tips, thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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