bloodeyezack Posted June 5, 2010 Share Posted June 5, 2010 yeah I have been messing around and getting better with FL and this one is what I'm willing to share at the moment. tell me what you think. Click here to listen to road of sorrow.mp3 http://tindeck.com/users/bloodeyezack Click here to download The lost ones.mp3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drayzon Posted June 5, 2010 Share Posted June 5, 2010 Cool. I liked it, especially the organ/e-piano in the background. The only recommendation I would have would be to tweak the lead a little bit, it was kinda piercing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gimgak Posted June 5, 2010 Share Posted June 5, 2010 I'm feeling this. I probably would not listen to this in my free time, but I could definately see it being the background music for a video game or movie where something epic is about to happen. There is just a constant rise of energy. I have to agree with Drayzon. That one lead is a little bit too piercing. Maybe try a different synth? Overall pretty good for a first original, I can sense a distinct style in it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bloodeyezack Posted June 6, 2010 Author Share Posted June 6, 2010 I tweaked the lead a little. and thanks for the comments. I might just change the lead altogether but for now I'll leave it how it it is. yeah this was different from how my Remix is by far (which I'm still working on btw). I put a little more feeling into it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fernito Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 I really liked the mellodies, it really sounds like a road to sorrow haha. The samples could be improved though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bloodeyezack Posted June 16, 2010 Author Share Posted June 16, 2010 well I made a new track. its kinda hard to listen to but I plan on making it longer and making it sound better. I just wanted some feed back to see what I could do to make it better. (lol I know that there is a few problems and that I should have got a little bit more work done but, I guess I couldn't resist.) the link is on the first page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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