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wip Sonic 1: Star Light Zone (Remix)

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You enter the track without any kind of buildup; you're just thrown into it. That makes it hard to get used to it. That piece at 0:26 is... ugly. Overall you've thrown in a LOT of different instruments, making the whole track feel chaotic and incohesive. This sounds more like a Casino Night-like rendition than the nice serenity of Starlight Zone. IMHO, not such a good thing...

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The sounds you got going are great. They are very easy on the ears. But, you don't really change it up much. You have the same track with a slight curveball thrown in there. It's labeled as a WIP so I assume you're still working on it. Try to build up an intro and change up the song to make it yours.

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Well I feel where most of y'all are coming from. The fact is I envisioned this as more of an arrangement than a full-on remix, explaining the immediate intro and lack of change. Although I wanted to go for a harder, techno sound than the more tranquil original. I felt that it's been done too many times and I wanted to emphasize the rollercoaster elements of the Zone.

But yeah, I do intend to pepper more variety into the song, as well as integrate the counter melody better. I honestly didn't think the transition was THAT bad at first, but I'll definitely revisit that and tweak it as necessary. Thanks for the feedback though!

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