WiiCube64 Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Second song to be put here. This is a ROUGH creation recently I made at school in my music arts class. I am looking for some feedback to improve it before I make it with real instruments. It is 100% MIDI right now, so don't complain about the instruments sounding fake, I am well aware. I was tired of explaining the amount of work I put into my last song, and people continued to call it fake. I hate criticism of that kind when I explained it was a rough creation i made. Please tell me anything I did wrong or anything I can do to improve it. As always be tough, but fair. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/400562 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Invader_Quirk Posted February 19, 2011 Share Posted February 19, 2011 Well, right now it's really just the original tune over a generic thumping beat. There's no real arrangement and the song doesn't go anywhere... anywhere new at least. I'm sorry I can't be more specific in my criticism. If you try to expand on the source and post your progress, I'd be happy to give my thoughts on that, but right now all I can say is add some newness to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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