DaMonz Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 Current tentative title "Courage in Life, Honor in Death". Source: Remix v1: http://tindeck.com/listen/whdc This is my first draft, and the writing is far from finished. It's the first time I make a track with this kind of sound, so I'd appreciate a little bit of starting feedback, just in case. P.S. : That last part with the harp and piano is still unfinished. LATEST VERSION: http://tindeck.com/listen/wwwi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenogu Labz Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 I'm digging the arrangement aspect of this, and your synths are sounding pretty sweet too, but boy is it clipping near the end. You've gotta lower the volume and master this quite a bit; as it is, it's harder to hear all the parts when the song is so blown out. Definitely looking forward to further progress on this, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 Oh hey a Trisection WIP! The first thing I notice is the production is in need of work. Aside from the massive clipping, the drums need a lot of work. There isn't enough low end there it seems, and the kit sounds weird due to it not having that oomph. There seems to be a lot going on at a few moments and it can be dizzying with the way they are mixed together. There are probably other things I'm missing here, but that's just on a superficial listen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReverend Posted February 23, 2011 Share Posted February 23, 2011 Not gonna lie, I've never been able to produce a style like this, to my chagrin. But duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude! This is epic sounding! I have to echo the chief complaint thus far though: It's clipping hardcore, but that's an easily rectified production issue. The arrangement and instrumentation is just fantastic. Really man, this has incredible potential. You must take this farther. TheReverend demands it of you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaMonz Posted February 25, 2011 Author Share Posted February 25, 2011 Thanks a lot for the quick feedback! I'm working very hard to improve my production skills, and I'd like to know if you guys think it's paying off. Here's v2: http://tindeck.com/listen/zymj I'm still very far from finished with the writing (sorry for the crappy sudden end XD). I'm especially looking for technical feedback. Thanks again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaMonz Posted March 9, 2011 Author Share Posted March 9, 2011 Here's another update http://tindeck.com/listen/uwxq Any feedback is appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaMonz Posted March 16, 2011 Author Share Posted March 16, 2011 Bumping with another update! http://tindeck.com/listen/wwwi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dalkaen Posted April 11, 2011 Share Posted April 11, 2011 I really dig what you have so far, dude. I don't personally like the synth at the very beginning, but I don't have any qualms with the rest of your sounds. There are a few points in the mix where it sounds a little muddy and I wish the individual sounds were a little more distinct. I love the arrangement overall, but I could probably grow tired of that main melody over the course of a longer piece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaMonz Posted April 15, 2011 Author Share Posted April 15, 2011 Thanks for the comment! I'll make sure to check out that synth and those muddy parts Oh and thanks for the cue about the melody, I'll keep it in mind Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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