timaeus222 Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 I highly encourage you to keep working on 2:58 - 3:12. It seems to be a climax that leads into the outtro, so keep improving it until it sounds much better than the previous sections. The lead in to 3:12 is still not very clean. Again, the drums just stopping like that sounds kind of lazy, to put it in a nice way. It would be a good decision to add some sort of final lead in there. At 3:17 - 3:20, I would have expected the strings there to be softer than at 3:12 - 3:15. If you do that, it will be more obvious that you are nearing the ending. Sounding much better, too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.