ellywu2 Posted January 29, 2013 Share Posted January 29, 2013 (edited) Hello everyone, Random electro-house noodlings... enjoy! (still a lot of work to do). https://soundcloud.com/ellywu2 Edited March 24, 2013 by ellywu2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dafydd Posted January 30, 2013 Share Posted January 30, 2013 I don't like the lead instrument at all, it's too harsh and dead somehow. You got the beat down though, obviously. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ellywu2 Posted February 6, 2013 Author Share Posted February 6, 2013 Updated! I quite like the harshness of the lead, though can soften it someone in the mixing stage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PirateCrab Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 Absolutely fricken love the melody! However, couple things that are bumming me out at the moment. Take for example 0:49, the lead synth pulls through fairly sharp and feels overpowering. Possibly tone down the volume a tad at this point? As said above, the lead synth sounds fairly sharp. Sounds great but it does hurt the ears a tad. Bass also feels like it's lacking a bit in the mix. The pump is there from the kick, but the bass feels like it's not following behind. Kinda tough to explain. Either way, great work and I'm looking forward to the final mix! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CC Ricers Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 0:14 is a drastic jump in energy with the lead coming in. Everything before that would be a good time to create some sort of a build-up to build the anticipation better. Maybe some ambient swooshes or simple bassline to draw in the listener. I'm also not hearing much of a bass instrument to begin with. The section between 1:23 and 1:37 sounds too much like the section before the break. A change in the lead instrument or an accompanying melody would be nice to make it sound more like you're in the "meat" of the track. Overall this sounds clean and well thought-out in arranging the melody. Just need some those extras here and there to make it flow better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ellywu2 Posted March 24, 2013 Author Share Posted March 24, 2013 I've updated it a bit. I think I've got the final form down - ending will need some work, as I haven't had a go at it yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ellywu2 Posted April 17, 2013 Author Share Posted April 17, 2013 Another month, another update! It's starting to come together now. Mixing is way off, as always. Hope you enjoy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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