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Sonic Unleashed - Joyride into the Deep (Jungle Joyride - Day)


mikeblastdude
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The percussion is pretty good. I think the snare could be a bit more tight, though. The decay is a bit long, and I was thinking you could shorten it a bit and give it more of a smack or thwap. The kick is close to a pitch envelope kick, but it's not super awesome. Try finding another similar kick that sounds better, or layer on a more thump-like kick and make that a bit louder in the layering.

The square-ish lead at 0:36 is a bit soft and unexpressive. Try adding some vibrato and ambience, and raise the volume.

1:25 - The poly-saw synth that acts like spiccato strings could use more impact. It's kind of buried behind the acid-bass-like synth playing at the same time.

The drums could use a bit more variation and transition work.

The ending is nonexistent. Sounds like a copy+paste to me. Lead sounds bare at the end by itself, needs more TLC.

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