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Journey to Silius - Level 1


Mahrellon
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Seems like a good start to me, but there are a few things that I think could be improved.

First, your leads seem way too quiet. They can be heard over the rest of the mix, but only just.

Second is just a general comment about repetition, this one feels like it could benefit from you switching it up a bit, either on the arrangement or instrumentation side (or perhaps both).

And third is a recommendation to not do a fade-out ending :)

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