Nickl's Eye Posted June 5, 2013 Share Posted June 5, 2013 Hi there. I just joined OC remix a few days ago and this is my first remix. It's a remix of the opening title from Mischief Makers for the N64. https://soundcloud.com/michaelnickl/fighting-for-clancer Feedback is appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted June 5, 2013 Share Posted June 5, 2013 0:32 - The bass isn't very aggressive, and there could be a tiny bit more distortion in the rhythm guitars. 0:39 is plain-sounding, and needs more than just a generic chiptune tribute section. Maybe some detuned saws could work better, like .0:57 - The kick and snare aren't coming through very well. Did you try EQing yet? There doesn't seem to be a notch at the kick in the bass and guitars, nor any accommodation for the snare. The kick and snare are also a bit quiet. The guitars sound especially hollow here without a strong bass. The piano is kind of buried at 1:42 by the guitars. Piano needs to be louder. Pretty good first remix. I know it was better than my first. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamJars Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Not bad mate, not bad at all. To start I like the intro and the build up at 0.50. I'm not a huge fan of the chiptune breakdown at 0.39 as it kinda sounds bland. To be honest I didn't even notice the piano, until timeaus pointed it out and it could use a bit of a tweak. All in all you got a nice sound goin, but you've got a bit of work to do. If it makes you feel better it's far better than my first mix. ^V^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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