Final Kingdom Posted August 5, 2013 Share Posted August 5, 2013 (edited) Hey guys. In desperate need of feedback, concrit, etc. Click for the remix. Edited August 6, 2013 by Final Kingdom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelCityOutlaw Posted August 6, 2013 Share Posted August 6, 2013 I could totally see that source being turned into a flamenco track. Anyway, I like the overall vibe of it so far; smooth and calm. The lead that starts at .47 or so may be a little too quiet though. The snare also sounds rather dry to me. That's as much as I can comment on production since I'm not good at production. Perhaps in the intro, instead of the bass just starting like it does, do a slide or some short lead in. The transitions also feel a bit weak to me. Most notably 1:33. Again, some short bass transition just before could work. At 1:02, the bass just stops, it doesn't sound like it returned to the tonic as I was expecting? A simple G note on the bass where it stops should suffice. That's all I can think of at present. Hope something I said helps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chimpazilla Posted August 6, 2013 Share Posted August 6, 2013 Link isn't working for me! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelCityOutlaw Posted August 6, 2013 Share Posted August 6, 2013 Yeah, the WIP disappeared Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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