Neifion Posted March 4, 2014 Share Posted March 4, 2014 A man loses his pastoral life and is swept up in war. Now he has the chance to return home, but does he want to? https://soundcloud.com/kekopro/the-life-he-gave Feedback welcome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickomoo Posted March 5, 2014 Share Posted March 5, 2014 Just going to favorite this so I can listen tomorrow! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neifion Posted March 6, 2014 Author Share Posted March 6, 2014 Just going to favorite this so I can listen tomorrow! Cool, let me know what you think! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShrackAttack Posted March 6, 2014 Share Posted March 6, 2014 It sounds really good! Only feedback I can think of is for the beginning: I understand that you want the piano solo to sound human, but it sounds a bit too loose between hands at times. It is only in a couple of small spots, but it mainly sticks out to me at 0:20-0:22. It might be completely in my head though as it is late and I've been listening to music all day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neifion Posted March 7, 2014 Author Share Posted March 7, 2014 It sounds really good!Only feedback I can think of is for the beginning: I understand that you want the piano solo to sound human, but it sounds a bit too loose between hands at times. It is only in a couple of small spots, but it mainly sticks out to me at 0:20-0:22. It might be completely in my head though as it is late and I've been listening to music all day. Hey Daniel, thanks for the feedback. It's not in your head, it is a bit loose, but I felt it lent to the contemplative character. Definitely one of those borderline preference things. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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