Benjaipod Posted April 16, 2014 Share Posted April 16, 2014 What do you think of this?? i just finished it. I will maybe recieve some comments about "oh too much reverb or delay", but i was thinking in an ethereal, "heavenly" remix, with a D&B rythm, and i am kinda satisfied with the result... I want to submit this, do you think it's ready? xD https://soundcloud.com/benjaipod/chrono-trigger-guardia-forest-remix-zeal-palace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necrox Posted April 16, 2014 Share Posted April 16, 2014 Structurally, it will need more variation to get a yes. Nice inclusion of Corridors of Time. The percussion will need more variation too. I also like the pads. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nutritious Posted April 16, 2014 Share Posted April 16, 2014 Quick tips: -First off, this is essentially a cover of the forest theme with a DNB beat. Would need quite a bit more personalzation to meet OCR's arrangment criteria. I do hear where you made a change later to introduce the zeal theme for a moment, but far more is needed from an arrangement perspective. -Beat sounds very cool, however, it stays on the same rhythm pattern for the vast majority of the track. Some variation within the beat, fills, etc would definitely help. -More minor issue: some of the instruments are a bit piercing in the high frequencies. For example, the plucked synth that starts at :25 (especially the loud note at :48 ). At the very least, tone down some of the higher frequency levels. -Another minor point: I'm not super stoked about the bass sample you're using. It's not bad, just it sounds a bit off to me on the higher notes for some reason. Overall good base here TBH. Good luck to you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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