Dissidia Posted February 22, 2015 Share Posted February 22, 2015 https://soundcloud.com/williamthurin/seven-sins-struggle Might be a bit too much going at some parts, what do you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EC2151 Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 I like the instrumentation. It might be just my ears, but it sounds like most of the instruments hit in the flat middle. Maybe you can alleviate the feeling of "too much going on at once" in parts by accentuating the panning of the instruments? Otherwise, I find this to be a solid effort. Nice job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissidia Posted February 24, 2015 Author Share Posted February 24, 2015 I like the instrumentation. It might be just my ears, but it sounds like most of the instruments hit in the flat middle. Maybe you can alleviate the feeling of "too much going on at once" in parts by accentuating the panning of the instruments? Otherwise, I find this to be a solid effort. Nice job! Yeah that's probably it, I did decrease the panning range cause the strings were too far left but I should've increased the other instruments panning instead of decreasing the strings, thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nase Posted February 26, 2015 Share Posted February 26, 2015 i'd play with the spacing a bit...the several distinct parts take place in a somewhat rushed way, so i'd definitely suggest either some tempo automation or some bars of rest between some parts, maybe with some connecting notes. needs to breathe to let the epicness of your ideas shine, yknow? good work anyway! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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