Jfaferrie Posted November 10, 2015 Share Posted November 10, 2015 So this is a piece I've written for a game I'm currently scoring for. I decided to title it 'New Horizons' in honour of the recent mission to Pluto, which also ties into one of the game's themes, Space. https://soundcloud.com/john-ferrie-2/new-horizons I hope you enjoy, and any critique is greatly appreciated! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ganaé Posted November 11, 2015 Share Posted November 11, 2015 Hi. I like it. It's beautiful. I don't know if you wanted that but at the begining, there's a little delay between the string tremolo and the muted brass. It's strange I listened at 1:20 a sort of loop on the tremolo. Perhaps you can fix it? At 2:05, the short flute note seems no natural In the middle, I'm not sure but I didn't heard Reeds. Perhaps, It'll give some thickness (it's the word in french sorry if you don't understand). At 3:30 i'm not a fan of picolo. There's a clip at 3:50 Personally, I like percussion like Timbal roll or Taiko. Perhaps, it'll be fine in your piece. (It's my humble opinion) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jfaferrie Posted November 12, 2015 Author Share Posted November 12, 2015 Hi. I like it. It's beautiful. I don't know if you wanted that but at the begining, there's a little delay between the string tremolo and the muted brass. It's strange I listened at 1:20 a sort of loop on the tremolo. Perhaps you can fix it? At 2:05, the short flute note seems no natural In the middle, I'm not sure but I didn't heard Reeds. Perhaps, It'll give some thickness (it's the word in french sorry if you don't understand). At 3:30 i'm not a fan of picolo. There's a clip at 3:50 Personally, I like percussion like Timbal roll or Taiko. Perhaps, it'll be fine in your piece. (It's my humble opinion) Thank you, that is really helpful feedback! Yeah, it's weird how some of my brass samples sound late, it's not just the muted brass samples, there's a few other ones that are the same. I'll take another look at it and see if there is anything I can do to fix it, I may need to just make the brass a micro second earlier. As for the Flute at 2:05, I'll test out other patches and see if something fits better Yeah, in the middle section the brass completely overpower the woodwind, I'll fix the levels to make them a bit more prominent, or at least so that you can hear them Haha, the piccolo is like marmite, you either love it or hate it... my brother can't stand the instrument And thanks for pointing out the tiny pop at 3:54, that is something that definitely needs fixing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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