Arek the Absolute Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Nooooooooooooooooo ps im me when you can plzkthx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Shadow Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 hey i'll host it on revolutionaryrent if you want Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scott Scheule Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 Meh is it just me or does that thing at 2:05 go on for way to long with no changes? And of course ending could use some pazzam. Great song though. A bit. But by and large, fantastic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arek the Absolute Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 You know what, just pm me/aim me the song. The anticipation for such an awesome track is just something I cannot tolerate for too much longer. ~ar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Briggs Posted December 14, 2006 Author Share Posted December 14, 2006 http://www.sendspace.com/file/di8w67 finally, version 2 is finished and uploaded! alright, this version has an ending, but I'm not really happy with it any comments are welcome and appreciated, and HELP ME THINK OF A COOL TITLE kbye Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Shadow Posted December 14, 2006 Share Posted December 14, 2006 offer is still there to host it for you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Briggs Posted December 14, 2006 Author Share Posted December 14, 2006 does the download link not work for you or are you just saying that I can still ask you to host it for me if it's the first thing, goddamn it if it's the second thing, I appreciate it but I won't probably ask you to do it until I have access to aim again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wii-ler Posted December 14, 2006 Share Posted December 14, 2006 V2 is awesome dude. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kholdstare Posted December 15, 2006 Share Posted December 15, 2006 Title suggestions: Clearing of Mist. Effervescence. Misdirection. Renewal. Undergrowth. Meh. If you like them, cool. If not, whatev. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Briggs Posted December 15, 2006 Author Share Posted December 15, 2006 V2 is awesome dude. glad to have you back in my virtual life also, all of those title ideas are pretty damn cool and suprisingly insightful as far as the flow and direction of the piece, as well as the connection to the parts of the game it encompasses are you going to be a writer by chance anyway, I'll take all those into consideration and maybe formulate my own combination of them or something Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Shadow Posted December 15, 2006 Share Posted December 15, 2006 it was the second one so maybe when you go to submit it at least let me know, and i'll download it from whatever place you host it and put it on revolutionaryrent so you have a link that wont die and obviously i like the mix a whole shitton otherwise i wouldnt offer this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kholdstare Posted December 15, 2006 Share Posted December 15, 2006 also, all of those title ideas are pretty damn cool and suprisingly insightful as far as the flow and direction of the piece, as well as the connection to the parts of the game it encompassesare you going to be a writer by chance anyway, I'll take all those into consideration and maybe formulate my own combination of them or something Thanks! And yes, I do write somethings. Poetry and some short stories and stuff. Good guess! Glad you liked them and feel free to mess around with them as far as combinationness. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Shadow Posted December 15, 2006 Share Posted December 15, 2006 also for some reason I can see a simple title like "Mischief" working pretty well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Briggs Posted December 15, 2006 Author Share Posted December 15, 2006 also, all of those title ideas are pretty damn cool and suprisingly insightful as far as the flow and direction of the piece, as well as the connection to the parts of the game it encompassesare you going to be a writer by chance anyway, I'll take all those into consideration and maybe formulate my own combination of them or something Thanks! And yes, I do write somethings. Poetry and some short stories and stuff. Good guess! Glad you liked them and feel free to mess around with them as far as combinationness. I do a lot of singer/songwriting on the side, so if you ever want help or critique on lyrics or poetry, feel free to pm or e-mail me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shpladoink Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 I much prefer remixes that make use of original sound effects over those that do not. For the most part. I like this, Mister Coat. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monobrow Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 I like how you incorporated the fairy theme back into theme of woods neat ~fin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
watkinzez Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 Yah, if you're going to do an ending like that, it needs more of a segue, longer fade crossover. Everything else is cool though. As for a title, needs something like 'Trippin Tree Roots', except less bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kholdstare Posted December 16, 2006 Share Posted December 16, 2006 I do a lot of singer/songwriting on the side, so if you ever want help or critique on lyrics or poetry, feel free to pm or e-mail me Will do. Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Briggs Posted December 17, 2006 Author Share Posted December 17, 2006 I'm thinking of making the official title "techno robot trees olol" not really, but it would be thoroughly awesome to see that title on the front page of ocr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Villainelle Posted December 18, 2006 Share Posted December 18, 2006 This is ace. Just a couple suggestions to tighten it up that last little notch... The hi-hat someone mentioned, comes in at about 1:05 and plays occasionally throughout the song (again at 1:27, 1:54, and so on). It's way too loud and dry and doesn't sit in the mix well. Would be fine if it was a little wetter and had some velocity dynamics. The drums throughout, and the song overall is also on the dry side. Don't know if this is stylistically intentional, is it? I would suggest just a little more reverb and some warming effects applied throughout the whole piece, just to make it smoother and more addictive to listen to than it already is, which is the point of trance after all. The ending is dicey. It just doesn't seem to gel with the rest of the song. You could always do the cliché crescendo-to-fadeout trance ending, or something closer to the intro, winding down parts/instruments until it just ends with the beating heart. Whatever, you'll come up with something. Aside from that, this is 100% pure distilled kickass. This will definitely get a lot of play for me. Kudos in advance for what will undoubtedly be on the front page soon, bud. "techno robot trees olol" gets my vote too. If not that, then "Effervescence" or some variation seems most fitting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Briggs Posted December 18, 2006 Author Share Posted December 18, 2006 yeah, I'm not happy with the ending either I'm currently trying to fix it with weapons-grade awesome I'll listen for the reverb issues you brought up... I didn't expect anyone to have a comment about that, but now that I think of it, I didn't pay very close attention to the effects levels Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arek the Absolute Posted December 19, 2006 Share Posted December 19, 2006 fairy fountain part was siiiiiiiiiiiiiick i love you with mouth ps might be doing something as tribute to kondo (NOT A PROJECT OOOOMG PS IF YOU* STEAL IDEA ABOUT CREATING PROJECT THAT IS SO FUCKING LAME AND YOU DESERVE TITLE AS ETERNAL ASSHOLE) and i wanna talk to you about it so get on aim when you can *does not apply to cth oh and dude the ending fits just fine. i am actually really happy with it ps please make the fairy fountain section a bit longer imagine this song as a sexy lady the main part focuses on the body *and what a body* and then the fairy fountain part is like focusing on the face *man thats a hot face* but then it goes back to the body too quickly not giving focus on the face that it deserves Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arek the Absolute Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 Bumpage. Must hear final version D: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Shadow Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Whar Bez Chth Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gollgagh Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 He needs tah get his ass back in here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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