AeroStar58 Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Hey there everyone, I'm kinda new to the forums, this being my first post, and I thought in addition to introducing myself, I'd include this humble sampling of my work. This is a remix of the Planet Corneria theme from the original starfox game. I haven't seen too many of those here, so I thought I would give it a shot. I put this together in About 30 minutes, and i think for what I have so far, it's pretty strong. This is only my first attempt at full blown trance( at least that's what I think this is...), and I know I've probably left some room for improvement, so any comments, suggestions, and helpful critisism are more than welcome! Enjoy! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=633990'> http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=633990 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicole Adams Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 You have a bad link here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arek the Absolute Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 take out the part and it works fine nicole you silly girl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AeroStar58 Posted December 2, 2006 Author Share Posted December 2, 2006 Sorry about that guys...it's ironic that my first post would have a bad link, lol. Here's a fresh one that should work... Let me know what ya think about the song... CroSsTrAiner http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=633990 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicole Adams Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 take out the part and it works finenicole you silly girl Wow, how did I ever miss that? Especially since I've been coding HTML by hand for almost six years. *lol* Oh, well. Anyway, there isn't much here to comment on. I think the synths could use a bump up in quality. These sound a lot like Fruity synths. Keep goin'! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trenthian Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 I liked how it started. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metaphist Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 Hmm, interesting spin on the main melody. I thought the drums came in too loud at the end, though. Not much else to say, as you don't have that much here to begin with. But I'm interested to see how you adapt the rest of the song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turnip Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 part around :09 and :10 sound a bit weak for what I think your going for, and I dont like how the instruments are added at :14, well I think they could be better I mean. Sounds like a cool concept for the song if Im right about the type of song your trying to go for. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sole Signal Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Hey dude. The link doesn't work for me, but that's okay because I'm pretty sure you'll send me any update on it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robotaki Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 take out the part and it works fine Miszou, silly you too. haha! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sole Signal Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 take out the part and it works fine Miszou, silly you too. haha! Nah, I know him personally and I'm just making fun of him. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robotaki Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 I got played =( lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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