Villainelle Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 1234567890 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hocus Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 I don't have a lot to critique. The melody could be brought out more throughout (especially at 2:16) and the drums are a bit loud. I think it would work better if you cut out the drums at 1:20 or 1:37 and then faded them back in later. The ugly chord at :23 and all the other recurrences should go. The opening chord doesn't sound good with that synth I would change what it plays but not the synth itself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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