tyrog Posted May 13, 2007 Share Posted May 13, 2007 Hope you like it, very sketchy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dafydd Posted May 13, 2007 Share Posted May 13, 2007 Work some more on this and come back later. It shows promise. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyrog Posted May 13, 2007 Author Share Posted May 13, 2007 Extended version. Does it need more work? Have I any chance to see it in "Latest ReMixes?" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Rod Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 Off the bat, everything is really left-heavy as far as panning....you have the main instruments/synths on the left and the background stuff on the right...makes for a very unbalanced soundscape. The arrangement has potential, though i think more sounds would help to spice up the interest factor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dafydd Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 I agree. It's very heavy on the left. I keep leaning my head trying to compensate for it, but naturally that doesn't help. Then it gets more centered towards the middle of the song and then too much to the right at the end. The melody synth you're using in the intro isn't that great. The one that comes in at 1:12 or so fits much better. Generally, if this is an ice level in the game, why not try some more bell-like instruments to make you feel like you're in an ice cave or something? Just a thought... There's no transition worth mentioning at 00:57. When switching themes like that, try doing it a little more smoothly. This goes for the rest of the song too. Make the fade outs really fade out, don't cut them halfway. 1:58-3:07 feels a little strange. The melody and the accompaignment don't seem to fit and the melody bell there is very fifth-heavy (don't know if that's even a word but you get the idea). The last section of the song is really the best as far as instrumentation goes, I think, but it's a little load - there's some glitching. My best advice is to let this song lie untouched for a week or so, while you listen to some other music. Then go back and listen very closely to your own mix. I think you'll be able to point out things that could be improved on your own by then. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yoshi1001 Posted May 17, 2007 Share Posted May 17, 2007 Very nice. Would fit right in a techno thriller movie. Somewhat repetitive-try mixing things a little. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyrog Posted May 18, 2007 Author Share Posted May 18, 2007 Very nice. Would fit right in a techno thriller movie. Somewhat repetitive-try mixing things a little. I'm working on that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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