1makes2 Posted October 25, 2007 Share Posted October 25, 2007 this is just a trance song that i was mucking around with and i thought it turned out pretty good. it is 7.5 minutes and i wanted to get some feedback from other mixers. please fell free to tell me if a snare is too loud (or anything else like poop coming out a pumpkin tree!?)or if i could use some fleshing out in places. thank you! www.myspace.com/soundforumusik song: warning..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1makes2 Posted October 25, 2007 Author Share Posted October 25, 2007 thanks again for your critique Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1makes2 Posted October 28, 2007 Author Share Posted October 28, 2007 anyone have any comments??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dafydd Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 I'm on medication. I guess everyone else is too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hy Bound Posted October 29, 2007 Share Posted October 29, 2007 This is pretty cool. It kinda feels a little bit like psytrance in the beginning. A lot of the sounds are pretty interesting and it seems pretty well produced (at least on my earbuds). The only problem I would say I have with it is that it doesn't really feel like it has any type of drive.It just sounds like you have 3 different melodies that you switch between the entire song with only slight variations between them. You may just want to add some quick-fire hi-hats a little later on to make it feel like its going somewhere other than where it was a couple of minutes before. There really isn't much of a difference between 1:00 into the song and 5:00 in, which kind of goes counter to what trance is. I would go look up the "trance formula" somewhere on the net. It's definitely an interesting melody and you have some interesting elements, but if you want this to be a trance song, you're gonna want to put it into the trance arrangement format. Don't get me wrong; I really enjoyed the song, but you may want to work on the arrangement a bit to boost it to where the production is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1makes2 Posted October 30, 2007 Author Share Posted October 30, 2007 anyone else>>>>///?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1makes2 Posted November 10, 2007 Author Share Posted November 10, 2007 thanks for the feedback.!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mousemuffins Posted November 10, 2007 Share Posted November 10, 2007 *cheap use of binary falters* Good song - I agree with Hy Bound. Don't know much about trance, though... It does seem a bit repetitive, especially after 5:00... ~laments how brief forum post #1 is...~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LongeBane Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 I'm going to have to admit, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1makes2 Posted November 14, 2007 Author Share Posted November 14, 2007 I'm going to have to admit, admit what? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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