Pixel Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 Ive been working on this for a few hours, but im really stuck with what to do with it. I've tried to subtly incorporate the theme in for the first minute and half... after that its just messy. http://www.megaupload.com/?d=E7BNTABI Be as ruthless with your comments as you like:-P EDIT: Ok, uploaded to Tindeck. Thanks for your help. Click here to listen! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ambient Posted November 27, 2007 Share Posted November 27, 2007 The main reason why neither of your mixes got a reply is because you are using megaupload. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zircon Posted November 27, 2007 Share Posted November 27, 2007 Yeah, try Tindeck Audio... I will check this out a little later though, FF7 bias Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboKa Posted November 27, 2007 Share Posted November 27, 2007 The main reason why neither of your mixes got a reply is because you are using megaupload. yeah I used to do that all the time >_> Tindeck audio ftw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixel Posted November 27, 2007 Author Share Posted November 27, 2007 Ok, uploaded to Tindeck. Thanks for your help. Click here to listen! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Derrit Posted November 27, 2007 Share Posted November 27, 2007 I feel like there's not a whole lot of progression going on in this piece. Its just the strings and a little bit of that voice, and that's all. Its just too sparse to make an entire mix out of just those two things, and it also doesn't really go anywhere; I didn't really recognize the ff7 right off the bat, and there isn't any furthering of the piece... kinda repetitive. It can be made better certainly, but its a ways off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inv1ctus Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 yea i would agree with derritt, just seems to need more to it. It would make great meditation music i think but im having a hard time connecting it compositionally. I would say expand more on the theme and integrate more ethereal sounds in the mix. I.E. or maybe soft percussion/mallets. Just needs something authentic and real to bring it to life and enrich the ethereal feeling it has. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboKa Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 oof those strings sound kinda harsh; especially when drawn out. Try Squidfont Orchestral...look it up google or something. And yeah this is uber minimalist, i'm sorry but I'm not getting any dramatic feeling cuz the string is pretty ugly. Usually I'm OVERLY friendly when reviewing stuff, but I think you ought to know: ya got quite a ways to go my friend, like me >_<. You've got potential, and you're not tone deaf, from what I can tell here - so you've got a BIG thing going for you there , keep at it dude, find better samples and add more support melodies/instruments in there. Don't let our criticism put you down - I used to always go emo over this stuff, but I got over it. Trust me, if you listen to what we're saying you'll improve tremendously. I'm still in your shoes, but every day I get a little bit better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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