Thanks man for a good reply and critique  
First off there is no bass, because I don't have a bass and I don't know anyone that plays bass. I tried a midi bass through fruity loops but it sounded really crap so I took it out.  
Do you know any programs or anything in fruity loops that can emulate a good bass sound?  
The leads are worse I agree. Mostly because I'm pretty new to guitar, so I could definitively need some more lessons  , secondly I like the song but I think the leads are pretty boring, so I didn't really have fun recording them. It's a bad excuse I now  
I'll try mixing some more and adding some more interesting drum parts and try again.  
Thanks again man.