Fantasy

So after 4 months I've decided to start working on this again. I spent some time attempting to clean up the mix, and it's definitely better than it was. not really sure where to go with the arrangement, I might add some strings or something.. I wish I could play guitar, that's what I'd like to here on it. give it a listen friends and tell me what you think! http://www.mediafire.com/?lfhplijxdyo In case anyone hasn't heard the source: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CP_jhyCffR4

sooo... some more changes. the last 30 seconds is really harmonically/motive-ically weak/lame, it was an idea gone horribly wrong.. so it will be changed.. but not now, or anytime soon. I'm officially sick of hearing this. before the last 30 seconds there's a bunch of neat little changes though.. http://www.mediafire.com/?xdlloz54xht

oh man, "just gave it a few more listens". that's intense, even though I've listened to it countless times now.. but I appreciate all the time you guys have put in. but yah, you're breakin' mah balls here, ya breakin' my balls. except for the last section there really isn't much in the arrangement that I would change, because it's basically at a point where I enjoy listening to it. but I also liked the first version that I put up, which now doesn't even compare. so yah. it's hard for me to try and change something that I already like, but you guys are totally right that it can be better. I got take a step back from it for a little while, but I'm definitely going to do more. thanks for pushing me!

thanks everyone for all your suggestions. I knew it was kinda repetitive, but like I said Logic was giving me trouble so I just gave up and duplicated everything. so after reading some of the manual and messing around with it I went back and made a bunch of changes; mainly to the drums. I probably over syncopated everything but that's just the kind of mood I'm in right now. there's also some new organ and bass parts... just listen to it. I think you'll find it phenomenally better than the first version. there's still other stuff I plan to add, and the last section needs more changes, but yah I think it's pretty cool now. http://www.mediafire.com/?m1nz1jmjwzd

hi everyone. I was introduced to this site about 4 years ago and I never got anything to a decent point of completion. at the time I was pretty proficient with Sonar but didn't have much composition skill. anyways, after a pretty long break from sequencing and a lot of detours I've decided to try and finally get some content up on here. this started out as just me trying to figure out how to get drums in Reason to work with Logic, but then I started to mess around with this FF song and it turned into a remix. I just started using Logic this week, and so far it's MUCH harder to get things the way I want them than with Sonar. I did a lot more duplicating than I'd like, but Logic has given me a large headache that I still have right now for trying to edit fine details (it has so many weird quirks). ANYWAYS, this is not mixed. I won't have my monitors set up for probably another month, so I'm mainly looking for comments on the arrangement. I haven't been able to get my keyboard fully working with logic, so this is all softsynths. also, I got a little inspiration from an old jazz standard called Little Sunflower for anyone familiar with it. Let me know what you think! http://www.mediafire.com/?xdlloz54xht (update from above)