This is my first remix, so I figured I'd do a popular song from a popular game. It's a rock version, still in need of huge improvements.  
Obvious Flaws in Version 1: 
‡ Guitar tones are "bleh". Real-life guitars sound horrid through my recorder, so I settled for tweaked digital instruments, which don't sound good either. Not much room to work there.  
‡ Too much repetition. 
‡ Very similar to the original: I changed the accomp. chords, but for the most part the song's structure is still very much intact, dimming the originality. 
‡ Too short. 
Link: [ http://www.fileden.com/files/2008/4/30/1889921/midna.mp3 ] 
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