Thanks for the feedback guys. Like I say, I didn't really put a whole lot of work into it yet, just a tester.
I hate the drums too. I'm currently working on getting something new sorted, the ones I have are a big pile of crap.
I think I'm going to start again, and explore the musicality of the piece a little more. I want to make my first submission at least semi-pro quality if I can .
Thanks again,
Fleb.