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Aaron Marshall

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  1. Pretty neat effort here

    You lost me around :35 when those synths came in. As a general rule, which can be broke from time to time, you don't mix layers like that so foward in the mix. Pads, strings, synths etc ...

    Slap a low pass filter over that synth at least and give is some modulation. Listen to how buried your bass instrument is underneath that bright synth.

    Send me the stems to this mix and I'll remix a section of it to show you what I'm talking about.

  2. Just get the thing to me and in the best quality you can manage! That's all that can be asked of you really =P Keep up the good work!

    Yeah, don't worry about it too much. Just give yourself plenty of headroom so you don't even come close to clipping. In this day and age, the one of 24/32 bit audio; it's asinine to clip anything. There's so much headroom.

    One good thing to keep in mind is; even the best converters will start to distort in some small way beyond 3db below 0dbfs. That means when your master meter peaks at -3. Chances are, you don't have anywhere near the best converters anyway, so you're dealing with an even stickier situation.

    Amping up your mixes too loudly is kind of like running a car engine floored in neutral. There's no functionality, yet the technical aspect of your device/machine is being strained unnecessarily.

    Feel confident in your recordings. Glance at your master meter. If it's hitting too hard, drag the fader down, and turn the volume up to a reasonable level on your playback system. Don't use your mix to give you the volume you think you need. Be in control. Loudness has nothing to do with the amplitude you can give your mixes.

    Let the mastering engineer get things up to a competitive level. They know what they're doing, and we have a focus on doing just that.

    Playback level is important. Listen to your favorite music and have your friends sit next to you. Can you carry on a conversation? You should be able to with maybe a slight amount of elevated voices. If your playback system sounds like a rock concert and you have to yell, it's way too loud. Your mixes won't come out properly. If it's too quiet, you'll be tempted to mix louder, which is detrimental to your sound.

    Trust me. I want the best not only for you, but for music and audio at large.

  3. I like what you have going on here. I agree bigmow that it's a bit segmented musically. I was actually thinking that without having read his feedback yet. You have a lot of good ideas going on here but they're not all culminating to a point like they need to.

    I like your approach to the mix. It's very bold. Lower the piano layer. It doesn't need to be so up in your face.

    However, your master is too hot and your limiting too harsh. You could easily drop the mix by 3 to 6db and be fine. As an experiment lower the master fader by 4db, and go easier on the limiting and reupload it. Humor me.

  4. Thanks for the feedback, duders.

    I am really not content with the fake guitar, but it's what I've got, so... It does sound realistic enough to give a guitarist the idea though.

    I do know some guitar-players. I can't play worth of two cents myself, so. I can ask someone to do it, unless someone on this forum is interested in doing it?

    I would do a remix. I'd stick pretty close to the original arrangement, but give everything more definition. You should release it as a single.

    Martin Tallstrom would be an awesome fit for this track. I'm not sure how much he would charge for a session.

    Martin performing a song from Twin Peaks:

  5. Hey I've heard your stuff before Aaron! Most ambient stuff puts me straight to sleep. However, I find your work entertaining! I always look forward to pressing the play button so I can hear all kinds of new and interesting sounds. Didn't know you were on ocremix. This is my chance to tell you that you're work is awesome.

    Thanks Chris. I really appreciate it. Your name sounds familiar.

    Anyway. I've never been too picky with tone. That guitar, fake or not sounds better than the crap gear I've been having to put up with for the longest time.

    The guitar doesn't sound bad at all. It's not as good as the composition. It's just such good writing that I wish the guitar layer had just as much integrity. The mix could use a lot of work. Based off of this composition I think Mordi could easily get signed. He just needs a killer mix

  6. Wonderful composition! It reminds me of Dire Straights and Tangerine Dream.

    As far as the composition, absolutely nothing is wrong here.

    The mix is good for what you had to work with, but I don't like a lot of your instruments. I'd love to enhance/revoice the instruments in this and make it release ready. You had me with the keyboard instrument at the beginning. I wouldn't change that layer. You lost me with the fake voices and the fake record scratching.

    The guitar sounds mediocre. That's not good for a composition that's based around a guitar. It needs to be a real guitar. If you can't do that, then your samples need to be stellar. The synth layers, I really respect what they're doing in the arrangement, but they need revoiced too.

    You've done a great job. In any other composition I wouldn't critique the instruments so harshly if I didn't think the composition deserved better instruments. Understand that I'm being hard on it because the composition is so well done.

  7. I really like this tune. You pulled some crazy stuff in this track. The times when it pitched down threw me off. I was thinking "this doesn't work". But then I was pleasantly surprised at where you directed the sound. It did in fact work.

    I want to do a cover of this tune at some point. Thank you for doing yours. It's experimental and inspiring in a way. It says to me, don't be afraid to F stuff up.

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