Phytopep

Thanks for the feedback. My brilliant idea of using sampled instruments instead of synths for my first song turned out to be more of a challenge than I thought. For the guitar, I attempted to offset the notes to "strum" them, and to increase the strummed gap when the pauses come up, but my guess is I didn't get it real enough. Since I won't be playing an actual guitar any time soon, I either have to improve my sequencing, or look into a better VSTi like MusicLab's RealGuitar. (Or not use a guitar?) I went back and forth on how much to humanize, since the original song's timing is so particular and repetitive. I'll revisit the piano to see if I can improve it. It is an oboe. I like how it can stand out, but that also puts more pressure on it to sound right. Hopefully I'm not not destroying it too badly? If anyone has more feedback, I'd love to hear it.

Here's my take so far on Koji Kondo's 24-year-old invincibility theme: Undefeatable-Mood-Demo-5.mp3 The version I used for inspiration is mostly SMW2: Yoshi's Island - Powerful Infant: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5wbX3lqbcfE I also took a few ideas from a new opening added in Super Paper Mario - An Unrivaled Battle: Let me know what you think. Thanks!