[Pokemon RSE - Petalburg City remix]

Sounds pretty enjoyable so far IMO. I think the ride cymbal could use some velocity editing, it sounds a bit mechanical.

I'm not so sure about the last part at 2:20, it sounds like the beginning of a new part but instead it just fades out, hmm.....

The piano chords from 2:36 - 3:21 sound very dissonant.

good advice on the ride cymbal, thanks.

and the dissonance was intentional i promise

[Orchestral Pokemon Remix (Lavender Town + Route 12)]

This is a pretty good composition man, nice work. You made these two songs work well together and there's definitely some kind of narrative to this. I don't really know how to critique it.

One thing I can say is, maybe it could be a little shorter. Especially if you're planning on submitting it to OCR as they want mixes that are between 2-7 minutes long

[Pokemon RSE - Petalburg City remix]

OMG This is SO GOOD!!! I absolutely love it. It is definitely a more liberal arrangement, but I can still hear Petalburg in there.

One question though... is the very end intentional? It seemed a bit abrupt after the fade-out... not sure if it's due to the program you used?

Thanks

The ending wasn't exactly intentional, I originally wanted it to just be a fade out. After I heard that feedback though I thought it would be cool to keep it and work with it.

[Pokemon RSE - Petalburg City remix]

https://app.box.com/s/s8iid64fqtwzz8mxetlf

jazzy mix i made back in November

the original song:

i was pretty liberal with the arrangement. instead of taking the structure of the song and remixing from within, i incorporated bits from the original in a totally different and progressive structure.

sorta took it in a totally different direction, a more winter-y direction. like Petalburg City in the winter ya know

[The Attuned Tune of a Zigzagoon (Petalburg Woods ReMix) WIP]

http://tindeck.com/listen/rijv

I have no intentions on submitting this to OCR, as it far exceeds the mb limit. However, opinions and criticisms are still greatly appreciated!

[Megaman 2 Crashman ReMix]

Hello all. This is my first post here in quite a while, and I would say I've improved quite a bit since my last ReMix i posted here. Anyways, here it is, "Crashing The Party".

EDIT: (Newest version with problems pointed out by TheGuitahHeroe fixed) http://tindeck.com/listen/ffgd

Criticisms would be greatly appreciated.

[Sonic 2 Ending Music Remix (Not the credits)]

So heres a remix i made of the ending theme from Sonic The Hedgehog 2. Its one of my first actually decent remixes. I would still like to improve it though. Made in FL Studio.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltAfpmxVLvc