King Tickenn'ya

I made a thread there, and then I saw the description of this thread and thought that maybe I had to use this one instead. That's why I made 2 topics.

This isn't a remix of Rainbow Road, this is a song all on its own. It's a similar tempo to the Rainbow Road stuff though, and I actually have a lyrics sheet for it and the lyrics are about racing on the pretty Rainbow Road! This is entirely unfinished, it needs some more oomph that I can find ways to add.

Er... nvm that. I'm continuing this. Someone likes the demo! Lol

Yeah dude that was a bad (worse) version of the song.

Ok, nvm this then. Another user suggested something that sounds smart.

No, dude, they're not rude because they don't do stuff for me... they just always talk in a mean tone. And that's my problem. Never really much semblance to niceness. I guess that if it's gonna take me years to learn how to make just 1 song, then I would imagine that just sharing my idea with people who could do it in far, far less time is a good idea. So yeah, I could probably make a MIDI and have it here soon enough. That'd help people get what going on better?

Okay, y'all, this is my 3rd version! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A6AN9jM33uc&feature=channel_video_title I don't really care for critique anymore. I like it like this. It's a good amateur feat I think, and this sound is almost as good as I would've hoped for. I'm not aiming for anything groundbreaking here anymore. Of course, I still need to ask for someone to lay down some guitar riffage, and maybe a tiny little solo plz? C'mon, let's try and enjoy ourselves with this one. Not aim for anything super fancy! I'm not going for that anymore.

So... I have to do... the ENTIRE THING over again? Since I don't have any of those things (at least, to my knowledge) nor know where to get them, couldja hand me some links? Unless they're already in FL... yo! Maybe you can reinvent this piece then, since you probably have everything you'd need for it? It'd be way easier for you... D:

Ok, got it. I can add a bit more synth in the "chorus" section. And that'll help the piece a bit more.

Neat song, but... I kinda got bored halfway through. Nothing was really happening, it was just kinda... stuck... in the beginning.

Maybe not, but it's a site for music, and collaboration. I've seen the album guidelines-- turns out you're basically required to get extra composers for it! While I'm not making an album, I'm making a song, and songs make up an album... I think most people here would be happy to help out and do some music too. Well, if you guys are NOT happy to help out... couldja point me out to a place that is?

I don't really know what else I could add... I wasn't going for a really "produced" song, I just did want a little "magical" synth in there withe the guitar as the main focus. That's my goal. I also asked that in case anyone can help the production on the song sound a little less sparse, I'd appreciate it. And yeah, dude, I have a different thread up now. In the PYO board. Go check it out, maybe we can let this one die.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-lcgJSQTG_o&feature=channel_video_title This song is obviously far from complete. It needs some heavy guitar, and it might need a little more pad synth. It could also use some singing... I could do that probably. But then again, so could you. It also needs a 2-second intro of some sort... that'd add just a bit more meat to this. So uh... wanna help out? PS the low-quality sound you might hear with a good ear is because I did purposely make this somewhat low-quality, because I do like music that's just a bit fuzzy. I don't ask for additons to the song to be low-quality too, but if you could, that'd be really cool.

Ok, new version will be made, without guitar. This thread can be removed now. XD