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Any thoughts at all would be really helpful!!

Hey guys!!! It's been a long time! I'm in the final stages of a new EP and I would love some thoughts on the soundscape/composition/etc. I've been working on a whole slew of projects and have had this one cooked up for a while, but I haven't had any critique on it from anyone. My goal was to make the most out of my sounds as possible while using the least amount of instruments (went with 3-5 + percussion) Hope you all enjoy the listen! Aim Higher Dig Deeper Run Faster

https://app.box.com/s/6a6alg1h7pu6nhpjfpg5 Here's a little more. I am thinking of either changing the pitch to one tone higher again, or shifting it back lower.

https://app.box.com/s/ex8jf20pgj6gwgbw6b0t

Really not sure about the ending phrase, but again I'd really love to know what you guys think! I feel the song itself is long enough

Got the whole thing done now! Tell me what you think! https://app.box.com/s/0hz3ntribi8jil1w2kxq

https://app.box.com/s/j1jt5u1435dkl6br2xa3 Just the ending phrase. It's amazing what you learn when you figure out what you need to listen for.

https://app.box.com/s/seqyyjxrr8k9prsc7vq2 Another update! I think the ending phrase might end a little too early...

https://app.box.com/s/2g5695ipf2a5qcmv75bv Added some more. Trying to bring it to a close. How's this holding up?

Did some more changes. Here's the whole thing thus far. I took out the introductory piano chords just so I could figure out what the main chords were. The cadence feels a lot better where it is! https://app.box.com/s/vyv13e4r16xc9wi0l5sb

Here is a section of the whole thing. I changed that bass so the notes don't clash, think there could be something else to add to the melody; it feels a little empty but I don't quite know what. I'm going for a disco type song. https://app.box.com/s/3w0bsnmighvykt79y4ba

Pretty much, chord progressions and harmonizing melodies. This started out as a chord progression test, but I wanted to take it further and make it into a song.

For sure the B-section was something this song needed, thanks! As for the Bass, I knew it sounded muddy, but I had no idea until you pointed out the dissonance at 0:18; like I say, always open to any advice. I'm trying out a new section; I'll post it p later today.

https://app.box.com/s/xcp8bmk7cl9fcgwrv854 Changed a few things. Some of the instruments sounded off to me.

Hey guys, it's been a while, huh? I've been working nonstop on songs, but this one is giving me trouble for some reason. I like the general tune of it, but I feel like it needs something... more. Here's the song: https://app.box.com/s/5aft3yf90ofclhyhzn2h I feel like I need to relearn some things about composition, any help at all would be great! Thanks!