Hey guys, Could use some feedback. This just got rejected on the judges panel (http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=45785) and as much as I'd like to resubmit it with a few changes. I don't have the original source file anymore since . My only option is to rebuild start from scratch, but before I do that, i'd like to know what the biggest problems are. 
I feel that if I do this again, I should focus on getting the right samples. should be easy enough, but since I know nothing on music theory I'm having a bit of trouble understanding some of the judge's feedback. 
What exactly is soundfield and how would one make it deeper? 
What is roomsound? 
How can I make this less two dimensional, should I try experimenting with balance and reverb? 
Original songs:  
Main theme: 
 
                                       Lith Harbor: 
 
          https://soundcloud.com/vortigon/maple-syrup