Thanks a lot for the reply guys . Hey Rozovian, just out of curiosity, is it the jazzy A-tonalish sound you're talking about, or were you meaning the orchestral work?
And Calum; thanks . Yea I definitely had some influence from Stravinsky haha, glad it didn't go unnoticed. I'm really trying to figure out a way to make the rest sound a bit more like that. And the temper/rhythm is absolutely something I'm taking a look at, I feel/notice it too .
UPDATE:
I have spent countless more hours on this, and wish I had something to update ha. Given that this was my first project with logic and garritan, I made a mess of my file . That one file was 45ish tracks, and becoming unmanageable. So I started exporting things out and started a new project trying to consolidate...
while doing so I had about a bajillion more ideas of how i wanted this to go down, and decided to re-do the opening, keeping the same piano, only turning it into a classical string quintet, to introduce a full orchestra as I went. The current plan involved me adding some minor African rhythm, and jazz percussion slowly, until I could actually justify a full orchestra with electric guitar at the climax (I have a brilliant friend who can easily record an amazing guitar part), which involved countless more hours of research, reading, trial and error... exc... exc.. only to get a result that to me sounds MUCH much... much... more synthy and generally annoying.
one thing though, I'm going to take a 15-24 hour breather from this song haha. I need to gain perspective and a focus, and figure out what can work, and what can't. I'll probably go back to the original version already posted, and tweak it somehow. SOOOoooo disappointed that I can't get good solos from garritan so far...
Actually, to be fair I may have just listened to this too many times to get a good feel for it. Can anyone tell me if this sounds as synthy to them as it does to me?
http://soundcloud.com/bustthenotes/ff9-battle-quintet-attempt