JKeck

Thank you both for the input so far! I've bolded a couple of parts I'd like to ask for more detail on. When you talk about the breakdown in the middle, can you clarify which part exactly you're referring to? The segment from 1:23 - 1:57 is what I would call the breakdown, is that what you're referring to? Also, when you say "it needs a more creative arrangement," is that referring to the breakdown specifically or to the entire piece? If you have any tips or suggestions for arranging in general, I'd be interested in what you have to say. As I mentioned, it's a consistent hurdle for me. "That buzzy bass" is, unfortunately, not a terribly helpful descriptor for me. The instruments present in the intro are the main bass (with triangle sub) and the lead from the melody both playing in unison; a couple of effect synths which emphasize particular notes/beats; and what you referred to as "that quirky accompaniment" which comes in later. Based on that information, would you be able to identify which bass you're talking about? Thanks again for your input! I'll definitely be making use of your comments as I continue to work on this piece.

Hi folks! I've been working on this on and off for a couple of months, now. This was easily my favorite song from Undertale, and I've had that melody stuck in my head forever. This was a lot of fun to work on, but I wanted to see what some more experienced musicians have to say about it. Something I feel like I've struggled with is variation. Any input on that topic would be most welcome, as it's a consistent sticking point for me in general, but of course I'm open to criticism on anything. I've been casually making music in my spare time for a few years, now. I'm a bit of an amateur still, and this is my first submission to the workshop, so be gentle! Remix - https://clyp.it/syxv12nm Original -