I put a new version up. I'm looking for an evaluation since I think it just might meet submission standards at this point. Please be frank, and thank you.
https://soundcloud.com/sleepycoaster/haunted-ship-v1-1-wrap-fade
Here's the original:
This remix will probably go through an edit before I consider submitting it. Before then, it couldn't hurt to get a little feedback. Please be frank. Thank you.