[Ironsword - Wizards and Warriors 2. Level 2, Cloud Level Theme.]

Hello.  Thank you for your reply.  I am reading through that article and experimenting, and varying up some things.  Will post back with updated version hopefully soon.
 

[Ironsword - Wizards and Warriors 2. Level 2, Cloud Level Theme.]

Song Remix name - Cloudy Knight

Original song - Ironsword:  Wizards and Warriors 2, Level - 2 - Cloud Level

Plan on submitting to OcRemix - Yes

Feedback request with some context:  General feedback, but also perhaps a focus on mixing/mastering aspect.  My main musical aspirations are:  I am a guitar player.  I write and record my own music, with guitar being the only instrument I actually play (drums, bass and any others are programmed.  Wish I could be a poly-instrumentalist).  I have just started learning aspects of recording as well as mixing/mastering.  My day job is not anything music or audio related, so this is all youtube/Google/experience based learning.  Any tips on anything would be appreciated.  When not recording, side musical hobby is just making songs in the program (FL studio).  I have found since I love video game music, creating remixes is a hobby that helps me learn the software, understand songwriting better in general, and learn to mix/master as well.

In regards to the song itself, most of the feedback I have gotten so far is "it's alright but there is something missing".  Personally, I didn't want to try to re-interpret the song itself too much. 

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