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Dalkaen

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  1. I really dig what you have so far, dude. I don't personally like the synth at the very beginning, but I don't have any qualms with the rest of your sounds. There are a few points in the mix where it sounds a little muddy and I wish the individual sounds were a little more distinct. I love the arrangement overall, but I could probably grow tired of that main melody over the course of a longer piece.

  2. Thanks for the comments, guys.

    I'm working on the clipping right now; I think I might have eliminated it somewhat. After listening through it again a few times, it does seem pretty loud.

    I'm also going to work on the first half. I've got an idea on how to expand on the intro, thinking about incorporating the bell melody from the original.

  3. WIP 1:

    http://soundcloud.com/dalkaen/chrono-trigger-corridors-of

    WIP 2:

    http://soundcloud.com/dalkaen/corridors-of-time-take-2

    WIP 3:

    http://soundcloud.com/dalkaen/labyrinthine-corridors-some

    This is my first attempt at creating an arrangement like this, but I like how it has turned out so far. I would like to continue to polish it, but I need some constructive criticism, I think.

    The vast majority of you are familiar with the source material, but I will include it here for completeness:

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